Wednesday, January 7, 2009

TRUE intro

Okay, this is the intro page to a much larger piece, (working title 'The True Story') (Not a true story) but I am a little stuck on some things, so please let me know what exactly this gives you, so that I will at least know if I am on the right track or completely derailed or somewhere in between. Also, I can't quite get the formatting right here in the blog, so bear with me on that, please...



A woman asked me once, “What’s the worst thing you’ve ever done?”
We were on our second date and she’d done nothing but interrogate me for hours. I humored her, because really, why not. When you know that a person is experiencing the last hours of their life, it’s easy to be tolerant.
I grinned at her, knowing my dimples would make me seem boyish and cute. “Sometimes I sing too loud in church.”
She thought that was the funniest thing.

2 comments:

  1. In my next story I'll wait til the very end for the doom. :D

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  2. Okay, probably not, but someday maybe...

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